Although there are some members of my family who value a good novel now and again, there’s still an underlying current of distaste, embarrassment, and outright disrespect when it comes to the genre of fantasy. It’s as if people can accept that I’m a writer, and that’s well and good–when I wrote an essay, a non-fiction essay about my family, people practically lined up to get copies, tripping over themselves to read what I’d written. But when it’s the work I spend the bulk of my time on, the fantasy, science fiction, and steampunk stuff, well… let’s just say the volunteers aren’t exactly queued up around the block.
At the risk of sounding like a jerk, though, let me back up a moment. It’s not that I’m not appreciative of people who have read my writing, mostly non-fiction essays and the occasional poem from college. It’s just that it irks me when individuals, not just in my family but in the larger circle of literary critics/publishers, dismiss works that are overtly fanciful with no other reason than well, it’s hard to understand.
Yes, there is a heap of terrible fantasy writing out there (as well as any other genre, I should point out). And for some reason, bad fantasy and bad science fiction seem to be exponentially worse than, say, bad historical fiction (this, I am certain, has to do with cover art in many respects).
But no one should treat fantasy as a single flavor of novel because, at least in my view, fantasy writing is as dappled, diverse, and unfettered as any genre out there. Magic or no, elves or no, dwarves and fairies or no, fantasy writing can take you anywhere. Things to avoid? I happen to think that (although I have a soft spot for them myself occasionally) there are too many dragon stories. There are also too many orphan stories. And too many main-character-discovers-his-great-powers stories.
There are, however, too few believable female heroines (especially the sort who would wear actual armor, rather than iron-clad bikinis). There are too few believable worlds, worlds which breathe their own character into tales. There are too few consequences when it comes to magic. And of course, there is simply too much in the way of the line between good and evil.
To take fantasy writing through this next century, fantasy writers need to examine their motives. We need to look into our collective crystal balls and ask ourselves why we’re doing what we’re doing and why, above all, we tell these stories. Because fantasy writing stems from the oldest literary traditions–the myths, legends, and religious texts of the ancients–it has a power over the human consciousness. One need look no further than World of Warcraft to see how much impact a fantasy world can have on (MILLIONS of) people.
Fantasy writers ought not forget the power and the responsibility we have in opening the eyes of others to words never before conceived of; we must also understand the line of ancestors before us, who’ve paved the way. It’s not something to be taken lightly, I don’t think; fantasy fiction that’s taken lightly often ends up laughable, cliched, and painfully hokey.
So yes, it’s taken me 500 words or so to say it, but here’s the thing: I write fantasy because it speaks to me. The decisions I have made in my life can all be traced back to a love of literature, and especially literature that took me somewhere else. There’s nothing wrong with our Earth, of course; it’s a lovely place. But the weird, the wonderful, and the wild of fantasy literature is, to me, one of the most delightful paths to tread. When I let my imagination go, I don’t visit France or Morocco or Tunisia: I go to Arda, to Narnia, and the thousands of other unseen worlds, just under the surface, their reflections shimmering in In Between.
I suppose, when it comes down to it, I just like to make my own rules.
May 27, 2008 at 7:53 pm
Growing up, I was always a good writer. My interest in high school covered fantasy and comic books. I have found as an adult that writing fantasy fiction is difficult. I admire people who can write successfully in this genre. Fairy tales are not as simple as they seem!!
May 27, 2008 at 8:21 pm
I’ve always had similar problems; my family on my mother’s side won’t read fantasy. They tend to dwell on historical fiction, biographies, and Dorothy Sayers novels. I can’t even get a ‘scan this and see if it works’ out of my artist mother without her asking some obnoxious question about why my characters are carrying lanterns or have ghost-white skin.
My father is far worse, though. Fantasy and sci-fi guru, computer programmer and former D&D player… you’d think he would be someone to help out? Except he doesn’t like fantasy or sci-fi written by women. And his tastes… bleh. In the end, no one I know in real life participates in my genre, except for the assorted geeks at work, many of whom claim to want to be a test reader and only one actually comes through.
May 27, 2008 at 9:03 pm
Great post. And I posted a link to it in my newly-formed FriendFeed Fantasy Writers room:
But I must disagree with something you said:
“there are too many dragon stories. There are also too many orphan stories. And too many main-character-discovers-his-great-powers stories.”
If you mean this from the standpoint of being able to sell your project to a publisher, I may agree. But from a reader’s standpoint, I do not believe there could ever be too many dragon or orphan stories in fantasy fiction. Just as there are not too many detective stories on TV or superhero stories in comic books.
What there are too many of is BADLY-WRITTEN dragon and orphan stories. I read any plot that’s well-written enough that I fall in love with the characters, whether or not I’ve read the plot a million times before. Or, if the same old plot is presented in a unique, refreshing, or engaging way.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to more of your posts.
May 27, 2008 at 9:04 pm
Oops, I forgot to put the URL to the FriendFeed room in my comments:
http://friendfeed.com/rooms/fantasy-writers
May 27, 2008 at 9:07 pm
@Bill: Okay, Bill. Touche. I agree! In the hands of a capable writer, any stereotype can flourish–these familiar themes are part of what makes fantasy (and myth and legend) so powerful to us!
I guess my ranting just went a little overboard there! I’ve just picked up one too many “orphan boy with mysterious powers befriends dragon to save the fate of the world” books that are badly written, unimaginative, and uninspired. 🙂 I think many people think these books are the ones that define the genre, and I feel, instead, they hurt it.
As a huge fan of the King Arthur tales, I’m very familiar with retellings (it was, in fact, my Masters thesis!). But I guess I’m just saying I need a good sell, is all. I need a real WOW.
May 28, 2008 at 12:53 am
@Kris: Definitely. I think when you write, when you’re younger, you don’t have so many filters. You write for the pure joy of it, and you don’t worry about what people think, or what’s “popular.” I know when I read what I used to write, I miss being so self-critical.
And yes, fairy tales are harder than they appear to write! But don’t give up. Practice can only improve the skills, even if it’s harder going than it once was.
May 28, 2008 at 12:56 am
@elizaw: I feel for you. But know that there are plenty of people out there who can’t wait to read something new and moving; even if you can never reach out to your family (and I know how hard it can be to move on from that), you will assuredly find an audience elsewhere. 🙂
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May 29, 2008 at 12:08 am
I actually agree with most of this, except for a couple points. One, that there are too many dragon stories. I love dragons, and in my opinion, there can never be too many dragon stories. Having said that, I must admit that the last dragon story I read was Eldest by Christopher Paolini. Two, that there aren’t enough believable female heroines. There might be a lack of female heroes in traditional fantasy, but not urban fantasy. But perhaps urban fantasy heroines aren’t believable?
May 29, 2008 at 5:06 am
As both a fellow fantasy artist and occasional writer, I cannot tell you how many times i have encountered very much the same thing, to the point where I have skittered around having to admit I am a fantasy artist or writer.
It’s good to see that others feel the same as I do, and are actively speaking up about it.
May 29, 2008 at 2:16 pm
Great post. There really are too many badly written “farmer boy is taken under the wing of a wizened man who turns out to be the ultimate badass and then trains young farmer boy into the next ultimate badass before sacrificing his life to save the boy from the ultimate evil” stories.
I love reading, but I’ve noticed its become increasingly difficult to find books I would really enjoy. I don’t want to choke on the sheer quantity of cliché elements. It distracts me from what I’m reading, and overall just ruins the story. If you’re going to use cliché’s in a story I think you should at least try to not make them so glaringly obvious.
May 29, 2008 at 4:32 pm
@booksandmyth Of course, we’ve all got preferences. I like dragons a great deal myself, I’m just tired of the same dragon stories being told over and over again. I know personally, I’ll be straying from their fiery ways for a while as far as my own fiction is concerned.
May 29, 2008 at 4:34 pm
@Erik Stell I’m tired of feeling embarrassed about what I write. I had someone recently say to me, “You’re such a good writer–but you choose to write THAT stuff.” That stuff. Charming.
But I suppose many people just feel good about sticking it to fantasy writers. We’re laughed at, not taken seriously. Not all of us run around in corsets and swords… at least, not all the time.
May 29, 2008 at 4:35 pm
@Rachel Exactly! Cliches are there for a reason and, when utilized correctly, can really say something, rather than… well, say nothing at all.
May 29, 2008 at 8:41 pm
alder – Yeah, I don’t blame you. sometimes all the cliches are a little annoying and i find myself skipping entire paragraphs.
July 10, 2008 at 7:19 pm
Hear, hear. I’m sorry you have troubles with your family – and others, as mentioned in your comment on May 29th, yeesh – but I am somewhat relieved I’m not the only one. I have not received open dissent from people I know for what I write, but they just don’t “get” it. For the record, I fully agree with you. I simply find going to another world more engaging.
July 11, 2008 at 2:26 pm
We move on. Sometimes recognizing that you’ll only get so far with some folks means you can go further on your own. If that makes sense.
February 7, 2009 at 7:50 pm
Natania Barron;
I can appreciate you thoughts. As an artist who provides visual content for writers and bloggers, I sometimes dwell in some very dark waters. Some days my request are for religious images, then the next its mature cover art for some unusual publication and yet again its techno. I have learned to just keep going and know that I enjoy my creations even though others question it based upon their POV.
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March 6, 2009 at 11:07 am
I am not into bad-mouthing other writers, but picking up on this thread, I couple of years ago I thought I would try reading a long fantasy cycle. I’d read individual books, and Lord of the Rings and the like, but no long modern cycle.
I picked up the complete The Belgariad and The Malloreon cycle by David Eddings from a second hand bookshop. I tried to read it. I really did. I know it’s popular but I just found it dull and gave up after 50 slow pages. Maybe I just wasn’t in the mood. Conversely, though, I was able to handle a duology, DUSK and DAWN by Tim Lebbon. Really excellent and, like Natania’s own work, breads a few tropes and boundaries.