Maybe. Having fun with a short story this afternoon: first-person with zombies.
Something fell in the entryway, a thump and then a muffled moan. I sat up from my work, moving the lamp to see a little better. It was dusk, and I had hardly realized time had slipped so far from me.
–Doctor Henrickson?
But there was no answer, just another moan, this time more mournful. Thinking the man had done something irreversible–offed himself, for instance, since even then he talked about it far too often–I rushed to the door toward the source of the sound.
It was my brother Anton.
–You shouldn’t…
He was trying to speak, but something was preventing him. Anton was curled up like a wood shaving, his face waxy, his lips chapped. And his pallor and general stench made sense, considering he had been quite dead for the last year.
August 6, 2008 at 12:29 pm
Nice hooky excerpt. Can’t wait to sink my teeth into its brain!
🙂
August 7, 2008 at 4:30 am
Snazzy little short. I did one similar a few years back, that one concentrated on a conversation between two, that eventually turned out to be one.
You have to be there ::nods:: Honest.
August 7, 2008 at 4:03 pm
@Jenn Haha, well, I’ll send it your way once it’s finished. Having fun with it!
August 7, 2008 at 4:05 pm
@RG Sanders Ooh, sounds like fun. It’s become a bit larger of a story, but I like the idea of it. I don’t know if Anton is a by-the-book zombie, necessarily, but a steampunkified one, at very least. I’ll post more once it’s fleshed out more (haha).